Can anyone reading this give a short summary of the story please, the review section is absolutely useless with none of it has any information on this novel. Only empty praises such as " Nice character, nice power, smart guy, good leadership" What is the story about? Is this some alternate reality urban setting, some time travel or something, like historical wars ect.
At first it was very fun to read and interesting but chapter 7 he will lose his penis cause of surgery it's like that, because his identify has been discovered by the Russians it just ruined the romance and story nothing makes sense now it was supposed to be good. ...... dropped this and don't if you like mc with no penis.... the author has ruined this.
I’m going to shamelessly give myself a 5 star review just because I can. Hope you guys enjoy my story! I still haven’t found out how to improve the spacing on my novel. If anyone knows how to do that please let me know. Thanks!
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A good story overall. The powers and system are pretty well laid out even if much of the populace seems to not know most of the secrets of the abyss. I wish some background was added a bit to how the world got this way, but maybe some history will be included later.The Main character and supporting characters really only 4 or so that are regularly in the story are pretty well done and its fun learning about their backgrounds. The MC does have her issues and does show lots of growth as the story goes. I do have to dock her a bit because she really is terrible at following advice, even her own.For instance: Mentor Say's don't do thisThe Next Chapter: She does that and almost dies (yet gets stronger)Later she has a unique power which if exposed could mean everybody wants to capture or kill her. Before she attends an academy, she plans ot only to use her less unique abilities and sword kills as to not expose her unique ability while at the Academy.What actually happens? The first test and spar she has there, she uses it and exposes herself as a target for a crazy researcher that I know is going to have implications...Overall though I really do recommend reading both this story and Nanomancer Reborn. The Author does a good job of making purposefully flawed characters to downplay their Over Poweredness. The Author does seem fond of Masochists and Sadists though. I do Worry about our Dear Author. :)
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