I really enjoyed his book. It is refreshing to have an MC that doesn't feel the need to save everyone, and I like how they have inner turmoil a lot. In autumn fall school I feel like a lot of the characters are going to be disposed of very quickly. You do focus on the main characters (I'd say Jaime, Lyra, max and brie) but characters such as Richard, Tory and the cat girl are going to be thrown away or a running gig. Like it seems that Richard could be just a pervet, no character development, although it is unlikely. Whilst girl I feel is very important, yet will still be a running gig. I could be completely wrong here, so sorry if I am.
Guys this novel is literally on the level of a printed novel the character development is flawless its a bit darker than most novels you will encounter but it really drags out that excitement and on edge feeling cause you just worry about mc and the character are so well fleshed that everything they do has a reason and everyone has a motive where its not simply that they are dicks so the villains have an amazing depth to them that makes you understand them instead of simply hate them for their actions and if you like game of thrones you should give this a try from the way its developing i think courtyard politics is gonna be important and its not gonna be like normal novels where politics is important for two seconds before they just go back to survival of the fittest and mc just has a silver tongue and flawless analytical ability you need to give this a read if youre a fan of well written stories
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