Well it is a interesting one. MC seems to use his brain properly and character development is quite good. Needs to improve grammar and some misspellings.
Well, our MC is a half-elf, and has been transmigrated. The biggest turn off is the huge info dumps at the start of the story. It does seem promising, but I just wasn't able to continue past chapter 20. However if warcraft is your thing go for it.
Surprisingly good. It's a misunderstanding story, so if it's your cup of tea I'd recommend it. To me, the misunderstandings are set up in a way that flows and is funny
look the book is great I'm just tired of authors having the character be a baby for the whole trial read there's no action I know the criticism but I like more action and at least a teenager character
I don't usually write a review when the story is still in the beginning, but it made me want to follow. There are certain grammatical errors but nothing that gets in the way of reading and the plot is very well done, I want to read more so keep up the good work!
Woah. That's a surprisingly good plot and story start.Looking forward to the rest.I would advise that you focus a bit in sentence construction, that will increase the whole story by a level because that is the only con I saw.
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