The Legacy of Shadows

Don't know where to start from. So I'll start from anywhere.1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading.So good job author2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up.3) Character design is perfect. Especially our Alexander the first.4) Despite the time and dedication our author is putting in this novel. He still updates everyday, what a perfect author.5)World background; It is so perfect, that I feel like reincarnating there. Still hope on God anyway.

It was fine at first, but the quality dropped after chapter 40. The racism really started around chapter 55. The MC is an idiot. He says having too many abilities isnt a good thing and that he should just focus on the few he already has. Complete BS. He can turn abilities into energy to upgrade his other abilities. He could easily just go around collecting tons of abilities, and using them to upgrade the better ones. But he doesnt.

I have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really good. And you don't know when something is good until it is gone. When I first started to read you book it took me on an adventure. I love to read books and it made me want to make my own books someday. I don't when I will do it but I will. I not not stop reading books.Some people say you are a bookworm becauses you love to read books. But who but those people who say that we are bookworms it is not a bad thing. We just love to read books. I am going to put some of my own books up soon I hope the best for you. I Love to read book every day and I will not stop reading. See you.

The writing quality isnt half bad and the quality doesnt jump around mutch either makiing it easier to read, perhaps personally as a fast reader i would enjoy more updates but as it is a original that might be a bit too much to ask for.Characters aren't completely generic but still a few anoying gimmicks that i personaly dislike but its good as a whole.

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It's a great cultivation novel, with promising Storyline.  The author should consider using adequate paragraphing, by writing different conversations on different lines.

The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly,  there are large parts where  I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot.  I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well.  My second critique is mostly  grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch.  Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole  is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work.  I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.

AN: I will refrain from saying sorry again, since you people should know about it already! In the end it's because I didn't have my own laptop and connection!