The story is decent but the terrible grammar just takes away everything it had to offer. Even basic things like names are forgotten from one sentence to the other, almost no sentence is grammatically correct. It's insane how people give this story 4+ stars for writing quality...I have the feeling, that the author doesn't want to edit his chapters or he doesn't realise, that this looks like a soup of letters.
Can’t get past the first couple chapters. Already glaring flaws in the story. MC during a beast tide picks up attributes and instantly becomes trainee level warrior. Literally at the same time people are like go back inside MANY times but then the author skips over and he ends up at battlefield. Also dumb how he doesn’t have to be near a beast or anyone really to pickup stuff. Magical fire wolf drops orb and he picks it up. It gives him magic fire ball skill cause of course. And then you have the shock oh wow didn’t know the scrawny kid could kill a wolf reactions. Also remember supposed to be a deadly beast tide, but he could leisurely think while everyone around him is telling him to go back. Andyeah just overall poorly done kinda annoying to read.
providence troupe??.....lets hope its good...raw..............................................................................................................................................................................................
Love Reading it, Writing is good, character development is also good, what was happening in the world was relevant but not too much that the MC was overshadowed by it the designs looked cool (Might snag one XD)
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