man,this story is kinda stupid,the people in this are not believable, I got a couple of laughs here and there,but the world building doesn't make sense.
Yet another great one author! Your story ideas are always unique! I've already read all 4 chapters, now waiting for more! Now only wonder what this system is trying to do... Kill its host?
*I'm writing this review after finishing this novel.*It was a somewhat fun read and I enjoyed reading it, even though there are several things that bothered me throughout the story which I will explain here below. 1) From the beginning till the last chapter, then translator constantly mixed up the way he addresses males and females. Sometimes for a female it is written as "He" or "Him". And for a male it is written as "She" or "Her"...This is just an example, however there are plenty of other annoying mistakes... I can say that the translation of this story was done poorly and I almost couldn't bear to continue reading it, so you should take that into consideration.2) There wasn't too much of a plotline that would spur the MC to progress and train hard, nor were there any romance in his life even though there were times it could have fit in perfectly.3) From chapter 400 plus, you could see the author kind of lost interest in the story and wanted to finish it as soon as possible, So all there was to the story was how the MC and his human tools progressed in their cultivation with no enemies to fight something else fun to read.4) Since the author wanted to finish this novel as soon as possible, even though there was an ending to this story, it wasn't satisfying at all and there were left many unanswered questions...But despite all this bothersome things, I still enjoyed reading it and the concept of simulation and cultivation was somewhat cool for me and enjoyable. So all in all, if you are not bothered by this 4 points, I guess you will enjoy reading this novel, good luck!
The synopsis once again does not do the novel justice as many other trial read novels. The novel has a huge potential considering the world travel aspect of it, he as a demon is able to be summoned to different worlds including ones based on movies such as Van Helsing to video games and novels. The story takes a refreshing change in normal novels in this website and finally a MC which actually acts the part, he's a demon so he views things in the viewpoint it isn't hypocritical as many other novels where MC's become "evil" or turn into a monster. The plot development is actually pretty smooth and nothing feels too forced, where time needs to be skipped it is where it doesn't it does not. The character development is alright but considering that the character is a demon and in a demon world where at the moment considering he's only a the level at which low demons reside there is not any "side characters" per say. Overall a good start to a novel with really good potential try out the 40 free chapters before making your decision.
So far, l enjoyed the novel so much. lt's fun reading the novel, about the character design, l love it. World Background is great, keep up the good work author.
Good start Mr. Gagan.This story work should not only ends up to this level, but goes for higher level for lyrics writing. And your name should be rememberd to each and every person.
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