I love the character development, their background stories and their future goals explained in detail and grace. I also really like the awesome world building! It’s a great story which I recommend to everyone and I would say you’ll know if you like it if you read up to chapter 33. To the author, thank you for this masterpiece and hope that you’ll continue this story! One question tho, how many chapters do you think this story is going to be?
Only a few chapters in and here is my review. Professional story! That's all that comes to mind when I read this book. It's very detailed and has a nice plot. The author seems to have a set direction for the story, which gives the writing a sense of purpose (something not seen often on these webnovel books). I noticed a few mysteries already popping up that are itching for an answer.No big cons with this book. It's another great system read that could find a solid fan base on webnovel. I see a bright future for this book and the author. (4.8 whish it could be adjusted a bit higher)On a side-note : Idk how you will do it, but a story needs something that stands out in the beginning. Whether its a unique MC(blind, deaf, ect.), setting (growing up in a dumpster), or a mystery. You have some of these, but the truly great stories put their own twist. Just my little opinion, nothing more :)
Will give it 5 stars but...it needs a lot of work, it doesn't give me the feeling that I'm reading a novel. I'm still in the process of reading it and the chapters are very short but there is something about this writing that I can't put my finger on that just makes it seem...incomplete. Maybe someone with better critiquing abilities will be able to spot it but this novel just doesn't feel like a novel, it's somewhere between that and a journal. I plan on continuing to read it for now but these are my thoughts. I recommend readers check it out for themselves.Good luck, author, I don't like leaving bad reviews since I think everyone should give a novel a try before they bash it and especially for new novels, leaving a poor review (star wise), can be detrimental
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