I can’t believe nobody left a review for the story. This is an amazing find. At first, I was a little hesitant to continue since the premise has been done a lot, but I am glad I gave it a chance.Before I knew it, I binge read the entire novel thus far, 29 chapters, in one sitting because of how absorbed I got into it. The character interactions are top notch and they FEEL complete.They have multiple sides to their personality and aren’t one-note which is great. The interactions are funny and well thought out honestly, but an editor would be appreciated, the grammar gets in the way of the story but not too much since it is actually legible.I don’t have fo spend a minute abusing my brain to translate what the author meant, which is nice and more than I can say about a lot of novels.Only thing I have a nitpick at, is that it is going a little too smoothly for him. But it’s not too big of an issue since as the story progresses there are some undertones of discontent and jealousy form others leading me to believe some conflict will occur eventually, but slowly and naturally.All in all, I highly enjoyed and recommend this to anybody who read my review.
Absolutely standard story, where the main character gets everything out of great luck .. He is constantly lucky and does not understand at all how this or that action leads to its improvement, which is funny because knowledge is not added, but the ambition grows like clockwork. The licking of the ass of the main character is incredibly shocking when he demounts his cheating ability in absolutely inappropriate places, in this work this is found in almost every chapter. In general, for 50 chapters, it only becomes clear that he does not live in a military camp, but in a licking camp. Nothing is clear about the world at all. About the story of the characters and their elaboration - they all lick asses for everyone who is older in rank or have skills, absolutely all characters up to chapter 54 inclusive, there are no proud ones. In general, the story of chapter 54 causes sickening urges. I do not advise people who are friends with the logic of things, here you will not find it.
Translation tanks after chapter 40. Story is interesting though. If you've read MTL then this is not bad but is annoying cause it's not supposed to be MTL but actual translation... but you've got lazy people everywhere and AI that's 'good enough' for lazy people
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Good story so far, character development slow but building nice and evenly, in my opinion, overall well done because i can see the scenes in my mind as i read them and i actually care what happens. Hope it continues.
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