First of all, WN recommended this, so I just skimmed through within 15 mins.
First few chapters already put me off. The guide AI is insulting MC a lot. There's no cuteness in it, it's a pure annoyance. If I started a game with this kind of setting, I will just quit this game and find a better one.
ok i'm liking it so far, but god damn is it annoying reading how obsessed das is with elena. like, he saw her die in a video game and he felt like his soul was ripped out? give me a break man. one of my biggest pet peeves in novels are overly emotional and romantically obsessed protagonists.
I have read till chapter 47 and as a fellow author, I appreciate the efforts put down by this fellow author. When you read the story, you will learn that it was written. Yes. And when you imagine the scenes, you will learn that the author also imagined. Yes. (～￣▽￣)～
heyo crazy cronie here,
review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444)
review divided in:
Short review
Long review
IMO
Ratings
Conclusion
Warning (includes spoilers)
short review:
A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag.
long review:
pros:
1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans.
2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand.
3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery.
4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it..
5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack.
6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments.
7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter
8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus)
cons:
1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro)
2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it.
3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words.
4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what.
5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face.
6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster.
IMO:
- maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read
-
Conclusion:
As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!!
And thanks to the author for the chaps as always!
WARNING:
*SPOILER (not exactly)*
- MC may seem a little edgy.
- rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil
- sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho)
- mc is dense af!
This is a well thought and well written story that takes it’s time to setup and build not engaging in mindless action. The characters have depth and are explored nicly along with the story. normally I don’t like game novels but this Book stands out especially in characterization and character interaction. this book deserves more attention pls share and reviwe so the author can continue to make quality work. Recommended.
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First few chapters already put me off. The guide AI is insulting MC a lot. There's no cuteness in it, it's a pure annoyance. If I started a game with this kind of setting, I will just quit this game and find a better one.
review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444)
review divided in:
Short review
Long review
IMO
Ratings
Conclusion
Warning (includes spoilers)
short review:
A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag.
long review:
pros:
1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans.
2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand.
3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery.
4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it..
5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack.
6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments.
7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter
8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus)
cons:
1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro)
2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it.
3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words.
4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what.
5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face.
6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster.
IMO:
- maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read
-
RATINGS:
writing: 8/10 (pro-4&6 & con-3&4)
update: 8.5/10 (con-2)
plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1)
characters: 8.5/10 (pro-5,6&8)
pacing: 8/10 (con-6)
dialogues: 9/10 (pro-7 con-5)
entertainment: 8.5/10
OVERALL: 4.2/5
Conclusion:
As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!!
And thanks to the author for the chaps as always!
WARNING:
*SPOILER (not exactly)*
- MC may seem a little edgy.
- rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil
- sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho)
- mc is dense af!
Now go and read!
It just keeps you wanting for more.
But the author is cruel, cutting when it is about to reveal an important info.
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