OK, this is my second review on this novel, and although it is mostly the same thing as before, I have to say that the author's foreshadowing are worth looking into even if the start is somewhat horrendous whenever the Mc isn't around his parents or girlfriend. Overall, a great romance story, the author even being able to pull off a difficult tag such as harem thanks to his character creation abilities. Those guys grow on you like a fungus, but in a good way. The Mc himself is sometimes infuriating, but as you watch his thought process for longer, you will inevitably understand what the author is trying to make of the reader-MC connection. I could talk more about this or that development, but just the fact someone pulled those kinds of plot points successfully makes me want to femboy, nevermind the respect that blossomed from all the proper discussions and dialogs, which lead me to write this relatively long review and not want to hide it behind some block.
Fazit first (200 chapters): It is an interesting story, worth reading.
The story starts very chaotic in the early chapters. Many things seem to make no sense whatsoever. Over many chapters the reader learns more and more about the multi layered secrets around system, VR as well as real world with their royalty.
The characters seem emotionally scarred with many callenges. At Ch 200 things are far from solved, but there is at least some clarity about the situation and the background. History seems to matter quite a bit, and it comes to light bit by bit over time. The reader learns about (almost) everything with the MC - step by step - and there are very few 3rd party POVs explaining things.
The story is a good read so far and I will write another review once I reach the current chapters. Around chapter 200 things seem to kind of "start off" and get even more interesting.
There are lots of weird things in this story, but I believe the author will solve everything in due time. So: My recommendation - go for it!
The novel has romantic content and mild sexual themes (on the level of kissing, petting and making out including felatio) which should be rated R-16. (up to ch 200, I have not yet read beyond)
This book has had me gripped from the first chapter. It is do well written and the characters are amazing. The unorthodoxy of this book gives it a wonderful charm and i consider it one of my favourite books I read.
Well done author,
Mad respect for uou!
Overall this is a very enjoyable story, well written besides an error here or there, but those are ignorable, with a very interesting main character who becomes more likable over time, some interesting love interest, and a dash of mystery that’s fun to think about. I think this is a story you should definitely give a try, you might have fun with it to be sure, but make sure to read the auxiliary chapter to avoid any momentary confusion.
The author has put a lot of effort into writing this, and he even rewrote the first few chapters several times. However, I recommend he get a proofreader, because while everything is readable, some syntax errors are very distracting to the reader. Besides that, I think the author has a very unique writing style that is amusing to read. Personally, I think his writing is a lot like how he texts in real life with his friends, and I think that this allowed many readers to feel closer to the narrator.
A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.
Since Idk if this has discord then imma ask it here. How many will there in the harem? Im planning on reading it and just had to ask that question bc bigger the harem usually means they get forgotten along the way. Hope it isnt the case tho.
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The story starts very chaotic in the early chapters. Many things seem to make no sense whatsoever. Over many chapters the reader learns more and more about the multi layered secrets around system, VR as well as real world with their royalty.
The characters seem emotionally scarred with many callenges. At Ch 200 things are far from solved, but there is at least some clarity about the situation and the background. History seems to matter quite a bit, and it comes to light bit by bit over time. The reader learns about (almost) everything with the MC - step by step - and there are very few 3rd party POVs explaining things.
The story is a good read so far and I will write another review once I reach the current chapters. Around chapter 200 things seem to kind of "start off" and get even more interesting.
There are lots of weird things in this story, but I believe the author will solve everything in due time. So: My recommendation - go for it!
The novel has romantic content and mild sexual themes (on the level of kissing, petting and making out including felatio) which should be rated R-16. (up to ch 200, I have not yet read beyond)
Well done author,
Mad respect for uou!
Seems to be focusing a lot on romance and harem. A lot of drama, mysteries. Kinda chaotic.
pog..
A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.