I have read to around 600 chapters. I can say for sure that I HATE the MC. He is the most childish, and ignorant MC, by a massive size, I have read. He constantly thinks he isn’t being smart while only being saved by the plot. The thing hate the most is that he talks about wanting to be a man and strong to protect his friends Andy family, but he goes into stupid actions. For example, when he finally finds his sister he, by ch 550-600, he finds that her memories have been sealed. Now, if it’s me and my sister has her memories sealed I would get her the **** out and find out why. What does he do, he decides to trust her because it’s his sister. Really, are you f#$&ing out of your mind. The final straw for me was how everything turn out find because of plot shield. Nobody suffered due to her plan being messed up, or nobody important is missing since you know they are the MC’s people.Overall, this is a cliche over cliche story with little sprinkles of plot shield, ok massive sprinkles. Don’t waste your time on this one.
Splendid!!! When I picked up this novel, I wasn’t expecting anything. But when I read it, I liked it since chapter one. Excellent job btw. I really like it. Thank you.
This is a more recent review of my own novel. It's not joke review, and I would like to dedicate this to people who are interested in reading this novel.The start is a bit slow due to the worldbuilding, but worry not, things will kick in. You might think that there's a lack of action and romance at the start, but again, don't worry. Things will truly start to consistently progress after a certain torture scene.Anyways, this story is actually hardcore sci-fi disguised as fantasy. So I hope you guys won't mind if the story switches genres in later parts.
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Fun action pack story with supernatural creatures.___________Like the action and the drame__________________________________________________________________________________________
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