At first I was pleasantly surprised by how alright this was. The MC is not a mega douche crippling dantians or watever they do nowadays, nor is he a little pussy. He's just a very smart dude who actually has empathy and conviction (ikr, that's impossible).Then I realised the author is atrocious at story writing. How do I explain this...Since it's a reincarnation type of novel, of course he has a life before moving on and the author makes this section quite dramatic before actually getting onto the story (through it establishes character so it's ok)Then holy moly does the author go on literary diarrhoea repeating the name of the training manual "[Muscle Tendon Bone Elongation .... Super Amazing Technique]" (I skipped a bunch of words cos who tf can remember this man) trying to get the wordcount high enough. After some point he stops. I was thinking of strangling the translator for making me read this garbage but then I realised you shouldn't shoot the messenger lol.Other than that, the author seems to think that going on paragraphs upon paragraphs of tangents about the most uninteresting things actually substitutes for a good reading. You can skim these parts tbh.The rest of the reading is made up of actual story development. You follow with the character and most of the decisions he makes, and the way he goes about them, are indeed quite satisfying and not entirely unbelievable.Overall, ok novel to read but you might gouge your eyes before chapter 30 or something when the author stops repeating {Muscular tendons regenerating vitalisation bone... technique] or watever it was called.<Ignore my "stability of updates"> rating since I never pay attention. I just didn't want to wreck my score.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Like it... waiting for more updates.
A copy paste of different work/novel author only changed the MC name and other characters, this is dumb.Rebirth: Hollywood by Soules King is already 160+ chapter, i bet this one will not much different
I like this novel. I hope there will be more at some point. But life is life. This novel has many ways in which its different from many others. Mc has a kindof unique perspective and self confidence that is not routed in him knowing everything but more his uique perspective. It’s also well written. Anyway I saw there hadnt been any updates and there is only one negative review that I don’t quite think is criticism. So just so you know author, I liked it.
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