it was good till chapter 40 after that it was like run of the mill son in law novels where he hides his riches and capabilities without any reason. moreover that chu girl's mother can simply investigate about him but out of her character she didn't. everyone thought at first that he is not doing well so he can not be rich but he used to charge ahead like a bull and prove them wrong but this time he is hiding that too is not according to his usual attitude.
Look, Im just gonna be honest. Even with reading the auxillary chapter and other reviewers saying that it gets better X chapters later, I cant reccomend this one. The main point of contention with this one is the Mc. Guys seems to be a normal dude who gets isekaied via bike and shoved into a otome game before being essentialy emotionally lobotomized. I understand its because of said system but my honest question was why? Yes, you explained why it happened story-wise, but why was that character shift needed? Was it really neccessary to remove the original personality so early in the story and replace it with whatever Zombie's personality is, if you can call that a complete personality? Does that add anything to the story other then frustration and removing the voice of modern history from the story? If it was Zombie with little bits of the MC poking through every now and then, that would be acceptable.As soon as MC was killed the second time, he essentially just became another,less interesting character. If you had removed the isekai elements from the story and just had him as a basic mob in the original game, there would lose essentially nothing because for a otome game setting, there are almost no Otome game elements.You coul just call it a fantasy world and nobody would notice the diffrence. If it takes 50+ chapters to get somewhat interesting or for some development to happen, and I have to pay for the later part of those chapters, then this novel is not worth it at all. Nobody wants to buy a video game that only gets good 40hrs in. If you want someone to read your book or buy your game, then that 1st impression matters the most, and this book does not make a good one.
If you have read any of the Author's other works and liked them, then you will thoroughly enjoy this one. This is definitely the Author's most refined work. The world building is good without too much of an info dump, and you are given more as needed. The pacing is good, and you get 2 chapters a day(as of this review), so there is enough content, but still leaves you wanting more. The characters are also well developed and have their own personalities and relationships outside of what they have with the MC. Give this one a shot of you like these types of novels.
An amazing story, I can't help but applaud the author. It never seemed cluttered or boring it is exciting from start to finish which is a testament not only to how good the author is at writing and how much effort he put into making this story fascinating.
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