The Impossible Fate That Leads To A God Of A New World

best story 10/10  just needs some dialogue fixing and spelling mistakes
also monologues are too big and author gets distracted on each monologues but it gets better

After reading 20 chapters of your story~
First chapters are big headache. Your style is something hard for me. I don't talk about grammar or something...
Later - story is really better to read. But still something tickles me. But hey! Idea is very good and I wish you the best! This is something fresh for sure. Just without first chapters.

Have just discovered this story and I love it! The writing style is nice, so  the reading comes easy, I do not stumble but the words flow naturally, which is important for a book to have. Powerful language and character development! Recommend! [img=recommend]

Everything is excellent so far. The only problem with the novel is that the updates are slow but since the chapters are big and the author might have IRL stuff to do so I won't complain much. I also like the fact that the author makes the illustrations by himself. The illustrations are amazing. Keep up the work author.

The character design of Lucifer is an exceptional view in my perspective as I enjoy his indulging actions. The novel is a good one if I say so.

My gosh, your writing is explicit and the background is well explained. The characters were well taken care of. Your command of language is impeccable... I will save and read from the app to give chapter and paragraph reviews..nice job...