This is probably the highest score that I've given to anyone. Like honestly, you deserve it. I'm starting to like the first person genres now that I've read yours. It almost makes me feel as if I'm reading Percy Jackson once again. Ahh... nostalgia hit me hard. Your writing has a kind of smooth flow to it, which I'm jealous about (you should teach me how to pull those off). The character design is awesome. And since we've come to characters, I must admit, the front cover looks sick! And you've given the details in an apt manner, or so to say, not too much nor not too little. I think this balance enhances your plot more. If I have to relate to your book, I would say, Sword art online written by Rick Riordan. Overall, I really enjoyed reading most of the chapters.
Good luck!
Your book was really good; it provided detailed descriptions that allowed me to imagine the scenes in your story. I also appreciated your clear writing style, which helped me to understand the plot. Overall, it was a great read, although I found the name of the main character a bit long. By the way, I particularly enjoyed the way you described Shiroha in one of the chapters. Your description was so vivid that I felt like I could already picture her appearance
I've read till Chapter- 3.7 and I have enjoyed so far. Will continue reading. I have given you 4.8 stars just because of the updating stability. I know you are keeping busy but try to update at least 2 chapters in a week. That would be easier for readers to remember what happened in the last chapter and we don't have to read it again and again.
Overall it's a really good novel. Adding it to the library right away.
I think you've got a really interesting story here, so keep up the good work! I think being a little more descriptive with certain scenes would be helpful, and more frequent updates would be nice, but overall, you're doing great.
Its like the author just writes down half the story without any concern for how the readers are supposed to get the full picture. A poor immitation of a magic school anime.
I never doubt that this book is not good coz it's so perfect for my taste! The author is really born talented! Though, I'm a stranger, I am proud of the author's success. I hope for this book to be on top and be popular among books all over the world! Fighting! ❤❤
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Good luck!
Overall it's a really good novel. Adding it to the library right away.
I will be updating every Sunday, 12pm. Obviously, at my time zone.
If you like my work, add in to your library and share it!
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