The Imperial Preceptor of Great Sui Dynasty

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Ok. First of all, I don't want to offend the author with this review. Secondly, I'm going to review the first 20 chapters. With that said I'm implying that the book will surely improve in future chapters, as the author gets experience but judging by the first 20 Ch I have to say I didn't like this. First, the fact that the MC wants at all costs become a pro player is stupid, at least in my opinion. I don't think some people would really want to try a path with no certainties in a situation where he has no money and doesn't know how to survive. Aside from that, the story itself is nothing new. Aside from the fact that the MC chose a difficult race, there is nothing innovative here. The world-building seems pretty standard, again nothing new. The fact that the MC meets the weapon trainer and the mage "trainer" at the beginning already points to where the author wants to go, but it is another clichè, even the I Got the Masters is a whole clichè. As for the plot itself, where does it lead? What is it that makes it different from other books? Then, the writing quality. Ok, there are not many grammatical errors, yet the MC talks in a weird way with the NPCs, in a totally different way from real life and different compared to how he talks IRL. Then, the fights: essentially Here is the enemy, here is the enemy status, here is a couple of skills, enemy felled. It is rather simple. Notice: This is just my personal opinion. I'm by no means trying to offend or saying my words are absolute. This is an opinion. Feel free to disagree and to read.

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I like the story its interesting to read with action and humor. The author takes time to present a compelling article. One that piques the curiousity of the reader and compels him to anticipate chapter per chapter of a good story.

Too early to write a review when it just began but whatever. For me it's a good novel and enjoyable read but the only thing that bothers me is that it looks like the System is brainwashing the mc lol, forcing him to do things yes but it just gives me those kind of vibes. Probably that's only me.

i dont really read horror stories but this one interested me because of the school theme but to my surprise i was in a horror ride. i hope you all are okay.

The characters don’t fully act in accordance to their age. And as a result can be a little annoying and pulls me out of the immersion. This is really the biggest reasons I drop novels beside edge lords. Nothing horrible about the book nothing to amazing. It’s just alright for me but could be someone else’s cup of tea.

I like this story very much, Download this for just this story 🙏🙏😍😍