The Humble Beginning of a Fake Fake Cultist

The novel is pretty nice to read. Too bad there's no new regarding update. If you want to read this then go ahead but you will left with no new chapters.

I had the opportunity to read the first 20 chapters of the web novel "My Cultivation Prowess Peaks after I Buried the Great Emperor's Corpse" and overall, I have mixed feelings about it.On one hand, I must commend the translation quality. The language used is easy to understand and flows smoothly, making it easy to immerse oneself in the story. I wont talk about the stability of the updates yet.However, I felt that the story development left something to be desired. While the concept of an invincible system that allows the protagonist to take over the corpses of the powerful and their possessions is great and adds a new level of excitement to the story, I felt that the plot moved at a slow pace and was not always engaging. Additionally, some of the characters felt underdeveloped and their motivations were not always clear.The world background is rich and detailed, giving the reader a clear understanding of the setting and the history of the world. However, I found some elements of the story hard to follow, particularly the different factions and the cultivation levels that even till chapter 20, still did not explain, which added complexity to the story but also made it hard to understand.Overall, "My Cultivation Prowess Peaks after I Buried the Great Emperor's Corpse" has its strengths and weaknesses. The translation quality are impressive, but the story development and character design left something to be desired. The world background is intriguing but can be confusing at times. If you're looking for a unique and engaging story with a strong world-building, this web novel is worth a try, but it may not be for everyone.

This is my first time writing anything other than short stories in school. Please give this a read and tell me what you think about it. All constructive criticism is welcome. Over time my writing will improve. This is going to be a decently long story about Havok and his companions striving to achieve their dreams.

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Look and behold, her supposed boyfriend along with the other guys are too busy sneaking a peek at Irene and co direction thinking that their gaze went unnoticed by them.

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"Yes, I've reached here."

Magical Power: E (Nonexistent)