C35 All in my opinionThe translation quality is really good. Stable development not fast or slow the protagonist Qin Chuan and his sister Zhau Xuanxuan are well portrayed the details are a bit low though like what their wearing and the area and houses I have no idea what he wears but the one elderly guy Wang Zhixing (teacher) with probably hundreds of clothes is just showing off... very rich. The cliffhangers are predictable so it's not that hard to guess what will happen next, I like that. I think this novel is above average in my opinion hopefully the translator/author updates fast because the average words is around 1,300ish which is a pretty good 8 minute read for me.Nitpick time! from Chapter 1 to chapter 10 tiny amount of spoiler for chapter 34-35 only 2 sentences long just scroll through it I remember reading that Di Tai is going around killing the Fang family but later on it says that he's going around killing old employers."After hiding in the Kitagawa Kingdom for so many days, he killed many people from that martial arts family." C27-----"And all the people he killed were employees who left the Fang Corporation 12 years ago." C34Does that mean that they feel that the employees are like family and not blood-related? But then why did they fire them? Hopefully, they tell us in the future chapters.----------------------------------------------------------------------------Another oneDo they really need school guards? Also wonder if their armed heh heh C1Another oneI also haven't heard anything about the food yet are they not hungry when they cultivate?I also haven't seen anymore missions besides the first quest of getting 10 people.When is he going to teach them the spells?I wonder how strong a demon is in this world how does he know how strong a demon is if he never encountered one?Saying nothing on how he can just come and go anywhere he wants from his sect and that world...Mentions about the people in the park has over 200 people that can collect Qi still no mention on what the people are doing do they not notice that there are over 200 people going to that park and gathering to go into the forest or author expects us to know that they already joined and the protagonist is not commenting on it. Or it's just a really huge park... “Congratulations, host. You have unlocked an achievement, [The 200th Cultivator]C34 also no idea how many people are in this city or even the country or even the world. Oh you 200 elderly people just go somewhere during the day into the park then follow a young man into the wooded area of the park maybe someone would follow them but they disappear in the forested area no need to worry about the older people nope... maybe they all live alone... sad.(You should worry about you elders unlike in this novel.)Why only make it the nation and not the whole world?I wonder if the sect is in another world because why have guardians to protect it.Also I don't really know the levels of spirit roots only earth level and Heaven level and also middle and superior no idea in which order they are in but I think it's middle-superior-earth-Heaven...SPOILER... for chapter 34-35 about how he uses his voice transmission and how he can use it.He can do voice transmissions why doesn't he do that when his sister was kidnapped he could of at least tried guess it's kill first ask questions later.ENDAnother one"In an instant, wigs flew everywhere."they should of had their youth restored and not needed wigs anymore like the old men where it stated that they grew hair if they were bald.C5How does it not look like they are crazy when they are getting their friends to join the sect“As the saying goes, to be a great man, you must suffer."C5 There's no complaint by being called men? Could have changed it to 'person'. though it's ok to keep it like that doesn't matter to me much.“Deep down, all of you are unwilling to be in your current state." If I were in my 80's then I rather look like I'm in my 50's thoughWhat type of pills are there? after supreme grade qi pill is there stuff below it or above it what level of the 12 is it on?Why doesn't he cultivate as well when he has the free time not just using the clone.Qin Chuan smiled and said, “Isn’t it getting dark soon? If you don’t go home, your family will be worried.”After all, they were a group of old men and old women. They all had children and grandchildren, so it was not good for him to keep them.Does that mean that they can stay in the sect if they don't have anything going on in life like homeless people and that leads to another question did he even try to get homeless people to join his program in those 2 months he had.Another oneWang Zhixing (teacher) also has not concretely saying that he believes in cultivation he just still thinks it's that psychoactive drug, when will he believe in cultivation?Mountain Hu is slightly annoying might as well use mount Hu in my opinion.Never got told on what the teacher guy Wang Zhixing was doing during his day off, maybe still trying to sleep because it seems like cultivators have no need for sleep and the brain will not need sleep so the brain tells them I don't need sleep stay awake. Do they not know when they draw in the qi no comments from them when absorbing it I guess except the protagonist gets a notification that's all.Also later on there's a tiny bit of nationalism where the blacksmiths want to create weapons to threaten the westerners but it's not that bad because some bad guy whos dyeing will send their son over there because of their technology in surgery in my opinion making it kind of even haven't seen if the guy dies though maybe the ship or helicopter will sink into the ocean in a storm then... or he does die and blames it on how they treat foreigners.
Author with some shame here. This book is not a system based novel nor action based. I wanted to write something romantic just that. I will add anime , and maybe manhwa futher in the story. My only purpose to add more anime is to save some of the character which I think wasn't necessary to die. Like zero two and Hiro . So if you like romance filled novel with op system then here you go.
This novel has stuck to its tags. although the rate Ryan is Leveling up is little slow but still it's enjoyable to read as the chapters and story progress forward. The fights are there for a reason. I still find it amusing that Ryan, who was the weakest now became one of the strongest all of a sudden. that's cool though, he has some fighting experience from before. although he has no useful Traits with him, his System helps him more than his Traits would have. Just amazing.
With bulging muscle the thrust forward to face the beckoning power of Rentap's might. The collision of both attacks has caused the space to be distorted. If an ordinary mana user were to be within the vicinity of the impact his fleshy body would be ripped to pieces.
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