The House was Raided in Advance and I moved the Treasury to Escape the Last Days

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The writing has no flaws and the story development is quite nice. The stability in updating  could be a lot better. There's a good amount of world background as well. The characters are really good and you can notice that the knife has given Mike a more violent personality.

I hope everyone enjoys this novel, I only started working on it a few months ago when I truly started learning how to write in english. So, it still needs a lot of editing, each chapter takes about 3 to 4 hours to record and 3 more to edit. I'll try to post more regularly. For now I'll try to write 5 chapters a week and as long as I'm better at my writing, I'll post more.[From the way I want to write, I'm going to finish by the end of December, if nothing happens.]

Hello, I hope you're enjoying the book. This is my first novel, and I've poured my heart into crafting Vaporeon Black's journey. Exploring his path through dark magic and the challenges he faces was a thrilling challenge, and I'm eager for you to experience it. Thank you for giving my book a shot—your support means the world to me!

Jun Liu leaned towards NaNa's ear and whispered to her. "Let's be together."

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"Battlefield." I replied shortly.