The Honest Woman, But Mary Sue

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I’ve never heard of this fanfiction! Literally no one has ever mentioned it and that’s truly a shame because it’s so unique and good this is the definition of an underrated fanfic

Solid three this a great read for noobs, but only newbies. Need more work too much description dialogue that is easily forgettable........................

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I've just started, but it's very interesting so far! The worldbuilding is great, and I really like the idea of having two elements. The author also does a great job of introducing new characters.There are grammar and tense errors, but in terms of helping the reader visualize what's going on, the writing quality is better than 95% of what's on this site.I'm giving it a 4.6, but with a good copy editor it would easily go up to a 5.

"HE is here. You coming back will lead to more information leaked." The voice sounded angry and commanding.

The strange skill left Eden speechless as she stared blankly at the illuminating screen.

"Hey Grinder get the last hit" said Nightfall