The Heroine's Lover

Really nice.  I hope the author containues this book.  I like it just as much as the Beta novel.  Nice, complicated family, and a non face slappy MC is good.  I love cultivation boylove stories.  There just aren't  enough of them.

The story is engaging. The quality of the writing is also very neat although there are a few errors in the use of punctuation.The story development is also very well written. I really enjoyed this story. Overall impressive!Keep it up!

Quite nice one with unstable updates.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

   Michael patted Henry's shoulders. "At least, we could get some rest and went back home." Michael persuaded. "If you might yes, if me ... could not." Michael frowned with wonder.

My father pointed with his cheek towards the black foal, who now glared at me hidden behind his still unconcerned mother.

Good

"Waeyo? Kenapa kau seperti ini padaku?" kataku masih menatapnya.

In the castle of the kingdom,there is a meeting in the big hall room.All remainning sub ministers, including both lower class and upper class,are gathered there along with three main people of government. In the front chair,a middle aged man is sitting.His name is Sakurada Kin,the present king,most powerful in the kingdom with his legendary  spear .Next to him on the right side,the minister Azumi Oga is sitting,superior in strength and intelligence to any of subminister,consider as the second intelligent person in the kingdom,light white hairs and with some wrinkles on his face.Due to these two,the government is still on their feet as they are feared among the people due to their power and tricks.The third main person is sitting next to the king on the left side,

A truly amazing novel! The events are thrilling, and the writing style is enjoyable and smooth. I loved it so much and can't wait for more