The Hero Who Shouldn't Have Returned

it hooked me from the start i even read more 400+ chap in 3 days that was even my busiest week i had to find more time in my schedule to read itnow im regretting reading it quickly

Started off fairly decent but when they started the auction part it became almost unbearable to read. There were whole chapters where only one bid would happen then they would waffle about gave the whole time and repeated this multiple times. Also this happened even after the auction ended and it just feels like the author is just copy and pasting to finish the chapter within a required word amount. Had good expectations but it was executed horribly especially too many face slapping scenes for a novel about a guy and his daughters

It irritates me always curses on things short minded mc does not know how to think almost always over react on thing it's just obnoxious for me.

I like the concept and adore VRMMORPGs. I can see the potential and would love to see the MC being smart and having smart schemes. All in all there is good potential so you should have a read and see for yourself!

If you came here for a villain( a real villain) then please leave as this is not for you and me. Cause this is just another anti hero. He kills other villain. So calling him villain is far away. The Arthur should change the name and remove the villain tag as it misleads the people who want to read real villain.

Fastpass is going to be there for a while

i enjoyed the story but when gun comming i'm out, idk why fantasy world must have gun, if this is story about scifi its ok, but sorry bro i cant continue.

                    Lucas POV