THE HEAVENS SHALL BLEED

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Itachi wiped the blood which was flowing out the corner of his right eye; turning to look at the crew he saw looks of both horror at the slaughter they witnessed and amazement at Itachi's power, quickly waving off Chopper who rushed to him after seeing the blood streaming down his face Itachi speaks directly to Luffy.

He turned to go but Scarlett grabbed his arm."Please don't leave me alone." She whispered.

Awesome novel the only thing is that him hiding his identity seems a bit forced and unneccasry it really  takes the thrill out of things makes it seem like there is nothing truly on the line

good book with excellent story development

book is quite interesting.the way of development and story line quite good so keep it up

Well I don’t have much to say but the story is good and it have some taste of LOTM on it I hope it’ll be good and worth to read so Author don’t let us down.

I enkoyed the story, the character is likable and the development and tension is good. Not that it is a bad thing, but based on certain patterns , it seems sometimes very obvious the chapters have been edited by a software that starts with G and end T. But it still feels like the story is an original work. I don’t see as checking your grammar with software like that a problem .I would personally prefer some larger moments of breathing between tension. Sometimes it gives vibes of a battle series. One thing after another with no room to sit back and take it all in.I recommend it.