The Healer's Mate

So edgyyy. Unexpected plot twist. SUPER EGDY!!!Writing Quality 5/5. Upd. Stab. 5/5. Story Development 4/5. Character Design 4/5. World Background 3/5.

Hmmm, overall I liked the book. Thou there are grammatical mistakes and some sentences which I couldn't understand completely. Also, the last chapters were shorter and the time jumps weren't explained that clearly, though it's just my opinion anyways the book has potential so I'm giving it 5 stars.

Im on 287 chapter and everyday waiting for the new chapters.The interval between breaking through the Realms is not too far away, not too small...Quite good to read.The only thing depressing me is that everytime he becomes more powerful,many times more powerful  enemies appears and that just shows how insignificant his being is even afterall the cultivating in seclusion and every cheat-like thing he got from the system.

grammer is fine, but the story, itsjust another chuunibyou author writing his wet dreams without much thought of  how social life really works

You need to improve your grammar. And also, are you bot-spamming reviews?

Soooo, I think i just droped 25€ worth of Crystals on the Book and am now up to date. This Book hits a Sweetspot i didnt think i have. Fantasy/Sci-Fi with a lot of short but rich explanation of the World an its Weapons, with an awesom cast of main charakters. While some might not like the near op Protagonist, i think its well explained why he xan survive what he goes through.What might annoy the most is the sentece structure: Example: As them it annoys them. Example end. It happens more often than you think.All in all: Its an AWESOME ride and you should enjoy it!**: I cant wait for the next chapter. please faster T_T

Do yourself a favour and read this gem. I promise you this. Mark my words, if you don't read it now, you will regret it in the future!

First off, this is not your average, everyday xianxia.Second, if you don't like 'slow' pacing (As deemed by the public due to the fact that he starts cultivation later on, despite the story itself being quite nicely paced), then I recommend that you skip this novel. (Although if you give it a try and find that the progression is indeed, not slow, but, quite fast/ moderate, you'll enjoy it quite a bit.)As a (non) English-expert, I personally have nothing to say and do not meet my self-requirements for critiquing the quality/ update stability.Also, as a (non) English-expert, I don't have any right to critique anything so... Take this for a grain of salt.Story Development: The story development, although perhaps a bit biased (Plot-armour), is beautiful. One thing that contributes to this is how the 'system' of the flower gives tasks that the MC is basically forced to do (Although in reality, the MC figures out what he should do, by which the task then becomes revealed; thus, every 'quest' is partly/ mostly his own thought). Another thing that contributes to this is how the story clearly explains every plot, plan, murder, and so forth.Character design: The MC is shown to be able to think for himself in multiple situations, having to adapt to the schemes of his enemies, make schemes of his own and so forth; It is because of this, that we gain constant insight into how his mind works, ****** the fleshing out of his personality concise.Other characters are (Of course), not as well-fleshed out as the MC; however, we still gain some insight into their personalities.World Building: The one thing that I feel (Kind~of) let the story down.Yes, the story does a fantastic job of the tip -"Show, don't tell"-; however, due to this, some details are skimmed over... It still does a fantastic job however, showing the different levels of officials, the difference in status between different levels of politicians, daoists, royalty and so forth.(To be honest, however, it was just the fact that I HAVE NO IDEA what the worth of a copper tael is :/, sure one gold tael is roughly equivalent to ten silver taels and five to seven silver taels can buy a mu of land (~614.4m^2, just imagine a square 25 by 25), but the worth of a copper tael is never explicitly stated... (Relative to silver/ gold).