The novel gets off to a decent start but quickly falls off in originality and plot.In fact, the whole plot is the same: get a reward, show off in front of some rich young master or head of a powerful family, slap them, get a reward, and repeat the whole cycle.On the other hand, the harem is really unnecessary in this novel, the romance is terrible, and the relationships between the MC and the women feel so superficial and banal that they are disgusting. The MC is literally an ATM for women, and the funniest thing is that the MC doesn't even touch them; he is denser and has less initiative than a vegetarian in a butcher shop.
TLDR - Scathath best girlOkay, so this is one if not the first review I had to write for a novel on this site. I love the premise and while the beginning develops quite fast, the characters and MC are very well done.Came for the waifus, staying for Scathath
A story I could binge for if author would be so kind as to post more. Our mc is a devil on the outside but an angel on the inside, yet she isn’t naively innocent to the point it is annoying. She has her own character that bursts out of the screen and the intellect to carry her through danger. Everything is nigh perfect except for a repeating grammar issue. Grammar errors are in everyone’s books, but I’ve noticed you replaced commas or periods with ellipses in dialogues and sometimes in paragraphs, which is not so good in the long run. Would suggest to correct at least some since it does bother me a bit.All in all, splendid potential that makes me crave for more. Keep up the good work, Author !
A true hidden gem. The novel starts out rough in writing quality, but it gets much better, and continually improves (hold out until about chap 50 if considering dropping). The story is fairly lighthearted, and simple, and most importantly it is fun. The imagination of tye author shines through with many of the system names, and it is a unique take on a concept that hasn't been explored by many that I have seen. Over time I have grown accustomed to MCs in books dealing with severe tragedies that affect their character, but this novel, once you get past the bad writing quality at the beginning is a breath of fresh air. I look forward to seeing this novel reach 500+ chapters, and hopefully author will edit starting chapters with their current writing prowess. Overall, it is not a heavily impactful or emotional novel thus far, but it is charming and in my opinion, very much worth a read. Keep up the good work author, and throw some challenges at MC that he will face alone, like trying to learn some creative monster skills like a flame body skill from a Phoenix or something.
"It's fine. I can find a new one." Aria felt uncomfortable with the curious stares some classmates were giving her. She held her head up and paid them no mind.
Gilgamesh stared at me in shock but quickly calmed down saying "I have decided to grace you with my almighty name, Gilgamesh!" He yells the last part and looks at me triumphantly as if expecting some sort of reaction.
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