The Greatest city Developper

Absolutely right.

"Don't be sad, maybe next time you all find another opportunity."

Lin and Xin was looking for Zhao, Lin saw him peaking and getting pulled into the bar they ran to save him,but when they opened the door everyone was on the ground beaten up,Zhao was sitting on chair laughing and his knights were beatings the hell out of them.

"Such a classy taste for a man who didn't eat anything for 10 years."

The premise is great. The whole idea of a boy opposing heaven and stealing from it is also quite fun. The problem lies in its execution. The grammar and flow are all over the place with little to no flow. It makes reading a struggle completely pulling you out of the novel's world and stopping you from getting immersed. Flow is unfortunately a concept in writing that takes time to perfect even for native English speakers so it is just something that the author requires more practise at.

Hello future dear readers! I read the opening chapters of this story and I gotta leave a review before I continue! The author here had put a lot of effort into describing the atmosphere and the characters with the help of rich vocabulary that you cannot see every day. Plot is easy to follow with an interest plot twist that guarantees to keep you hooked throughout the story! If you stumbled upon this peace, I highly encourage you to keep reading, you won't regret it 🍻

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍

So I will be give full stars because I did enjoy the story so far.Main issue that I could tell is complexity and depth of the characters and also their themes but it’s still an enjoyable story, the system and progression. For me personally I like to dive into a characters thought process but that’s just personal preferences.Also congrats on being signed and well done, hope the later chapters have the characters more developed

Author is this dropped? Cause it was actually a good story