This is it. The author had to have put crack cocaine in this book with how good it is. The intrigue, use of suspense, worldbuilding, schemes e.t.c everything about this book is done well; I even dare say this book is better than tyranny of steel, that’s how good it is. I highly recommend it any prospective readers.
I normally LOVE criticizing novels! Hell, there was a time I was criticized for being too harsh to the authors due to my critiques!But hell if I don't love this story …A BEAUTIFUL execution of a new premise in a story, no overused reincarnation/transmigration/back-in-time or anything of the sort. A child inheriting his grandfather's empire while having to fight for his rights with his other family members (father, mother, brothers) be it in real life or in a VR game.I normally write reviews either due to disappointment (unfortunately, on this site, this is the most prevalent review one can expect from) or potential of the story (normally due to writing quality being really bad, but its premise being way too great to ignore).Guess what, this story falls under NEITHER.It's got AWESOME characters, world background and story development (at least for now) and stability of updates seems to be on a daily release (again, for now).Writing quality is also really nice; it has nicely split paragraphs and very good sentences' structures. Rich enough vocabulary and grammar is pretty nice.The only critique the author still has to work on (for now) is proper tenses usage. He messes them up from time to time, but it is NOWHERE NEAR the mix-up most other novels on this site have. Unfortunately, due to me being me, that still warrants one less star on `Writing Quality`, making it a total of 4.Other than that? It's 5 star for now! Making the overall rating a 4.8.Cheers.
I would have never thought, that there would be a day in my lifetime in which a good novel was released on trial read. Yet here it is, this is an absolutely amazing novel, please do yourself a favor and read it
so after reading 22 chapters today I decided to give this book a review for people wanting to start reading this book. The story development is pretty good so far and the time skips are crazy and perfectly written. character development I love the mc how he acts and stuff definitely worth reading I promise you won't regret it!
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