Pfft, hehe, I get hooked up because the game is called "God's Domain" hehe, God's Domain is it ey? Well then, show me all you got and don't disappoint me.
Wow, this book make me enjoy my spend time. Love it that words so big good, love it because i like to read it more and always be joy. I will wit you at the next chapters Thor!
Author is a really cool dude, you can find him on discord, and he also write really well! I think he should make his own discord! Like if you agree with me!
I'm going to be honest as ever, as I would expect everyone else, who isn't a bot, to do the same. The story isn't good, but it's not bad. The grammar isn't good, sometimes you don't even know who's talking. You also have numerous sentences inside a quote without a break. I'm not a professional neither is many people. But I know those who are giving five stars saying it's the best novel they've ever read is straight up lying. I don't know if you've run this over with a grammar checker or use the money you get and get an editor; But the grammar and the story telling is off. I'm not trying to be harsh here. I believe this could be an insanely decent story (Although I'm not a fan of girls in covers for a story that has nothing to do with them) ; Clickbaiting etc (I dislike it,) but this story has a chance to be decent. Why not look at the reviews, ask people what can be done. That is what this is here for!
I fell like I’m going to enjoy this soooooo 5 stars! Keep it up.This review must be 140 characters. This review must be 140 characters. This review must be 140 characters.
<p> When her mother died when she was just 15 years old because of illness seven days later her father brought the Si family. Her stepmother was widowed at that time. She knows in the first place that her father does not love her at all. They are the fruit of the arranged marriage of the two families. The Si family treats her as their maid. When in the first place they would not treat her that way.</p>
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