The ghost in her smile

Interesting but left a lot to be desired. Inwas intrigued by the synopsis of a psychopathic MC but left with a typical Japanese MC with a slight twist of psycho. Of course, he has a quirk of being overly bashful and shy that is typical of Japanese MCs to the point I just roll my eyes. Before the novel starts to charge for the chapters, the MC leaves someone alive for an unknown reason - which I assume it will be “answered away” later- but I found it to be completely unreasonable and frankly just a way for the author to push the plot forward. Pretty weak, imo.Now that is out of the way, I do like the MC and female lead relationship, especially how he helps her with her problem at home. The comedy is pretty good, the other characters have a lot of potential as well. The story seems to have a lot of depth to it possibly, so that is a plus as well. Overall, enjoyed a lot of the novel but annoyed with some other parts of the novel. The writing quality was decent for the most part but there were times of wrong verb usage, funny sentence structure, etc but it did not cause too much of an issue.

This is a must read. This is the best to come from trial read in a while. There have been too many simulators, farms, pets, etc lately. This is a fun change of pace, not to be taken too seriously. Plenty of overanalyzing by third parties that come up with a conclusion on their own. This had me audibly laughing multiple times. The rate of progression is a bit fast, but the leveling system hasn’t been too prevalent yet. Give it a read!

I love the characters already! You really get inside Zhen's head and immerse yourself in his world while he takes charge of his life. It's a joy to follow and I highly recommend!

I love the plot. Its different from the common plot of a rich guy mistaken as poor and the belittled. This one is unique and therefore interesting. I hope to read more. I hope the author will write more chapters soon.

High quality writer very few mistakes for a story. Good plot wit many twists and turns although kind of bumpy when it should have a more float kind of way. Can’t wait for next chapter and stories too short

Author here, I've really been enjoying working on this book. I'm hoping to take it to new heights in the future, and want to express how thankful I am to all the readers.

I've only read a few chapters, but I've read some system esque books before, and I can say this is going to be a great read. The Backstory is super helpful, and the greatest thing about it is that this is the first time I've seen anything like everyone having a system. I think it's a unique book, and I look forward to reading More!!💯💯

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