I have a question. I am trying to learn English is this book appropriate to for the beginners level and if you have a recommendation please let me know. Sorry my English ı just start one month ago to learn.
I read up to chapter 50 (the paywall) and it's really good so far I really want to read more but cannot justify spending that type of money on webnovel. so I guess I'm dropping here. I recommend this if you have the 20 something dollars to buy the rest of it.
Really interesting concepts and set up.Seems like the story has a few too many ideas that are kinda competing with one another while trying to establish what the plot will be about. I keeps things interesting but also a little unfocused. I feel like the pacing goes a tad too fast at times with too many characters being introduced, too many things happening, and too many rules about how this world works being established one after another.Probably my advice would be trying to espace out the events a bit and focus more on smaller things like character detail. We get things like time travel, aliens, people coming back from the dead, robbery... But I find it hard to get invested cause I feel like I know so little about these people. The dialog also doesn't help. Everyone talks so much but it's mostly exposition explaining what's going on and what they're doing. Dialogs that sometimes go on for gigantic paragraphs. Meanwhile, the actual events like kidnapping a baby only last for a short while. I feel there is a need for people to say less and do more, and allow the reader to learn more from those actions .
The only pro is that the MC is OP and has a good base to start from.As for the cons:1> Author tried to put in mystery and failed miserably ( too much of anything just gets annoying and bad ).2> The MC is a Naive snob who doesn't know the value of anything. He has been protected his whole life so doesn't even know slums exist and is waaay too idealistic.3> The only ambition he has is to 'make his father proud' which is quite honestly just downright sad as it seems his entire character has been molded to present him as a good prince.4> People don't want to start a war against his father and yet they discuss war to take control of Julius???????????
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