The Fractured Sovereign: Awakening in the Shattered Empire

This stiry escalated so fast I litrily did not even get to comprehend what was going on and he was litrily getting random power ups like some z fighter

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The concept of the story is really good. Who has not wished for an open world Star Wars story. A good one. But the development does not make sense. It is way too rushed. It is said that the force user class is difficult to get and to master. He gets it by visiting the hangar in Naboo (visiting a movie place). That’s it. Ok, I’m a Star Wars fan, and I want a Jedi main character, let’s pass on that one.Once he joins the Jedi, he learns that he has to master the skills by himself (there are no skills learnt by default in the class Jedi or with. You have to explore and learn by yourself. Love the idea. In a week he is a Jedi Palawan ready for missions. A bit too fast, but still within the acceptable. Not even a month (in game, outside not even a week since it’s a 4 time dilation) and he is a jedi knight, a senator and owns a planet. Instantly a millionaire in real life…really? This story just needed time to develop, but it has been in my opinion developed in such a speed that is not possible in a game. You don’t become powerful and rich in a galaxy wide game in less than a month time in game.

Hey author number one here I just want to say that me and my friends put a lot of time and effort into this for your enjoyment so we hope you like it

I think the story is somewhat very not bad

"It's so cold up here…"

"Questioning again huh?" The doctor stated lowly, as she approached and began checking Aymeleks vitals.

"Should we get back to get help?" Cao Jie was inexperienced to such matter and unable to make a decision. While breaking through is nothing much to be concern about in the Inner Qi Realm, overcoming this trial in open woods made the situation turn difficult.