The Fractured Equinox (Elyndor Saga, Book I)

moment to moment.

And all that glitters is gold

"Tony, you think you and Widow can handle that?" The Captain asked.

Albina still sobbed now and then, but was already coming to her senses breathing in a familiar scent of the mist with which she played so often. Only now she knew how nice was that scent of the mist and of the forest fairy, who maybe even saved her life today. The fact that it was this fairy who threatened her life never came to her mind.

Reading Status: C21Writing Quality 5/5Stability of Updates 5/5Story Development 4/5Character Design 4/5World Background 3/5The total score: 4.2The writing quality is pretty good, so even with an instant google translation, I can understand everything perfectly, although a little more detail would be appreciated sometimes, you know. It is worth mentioning that sometimes more dialogue makes the interaction more organic, but it depends on the context, where sometimes the descriptions can say much more than a character's point of view. The important thing is to virtually understand the sensations described (as a reader), which makes everything better to enjoy.The upload stability is consistent, I can not say more.I can infer the development of the story, but I still look forward to seeing how it will be dealt with Kingdombuilding, one of my favorite tags. Which relates to the world background, well, while it's understandable that the central point of the story is the concept of the MC's system, the world that the MC will experience is still green.The character design is what catches my attention, and I can say that the author is consistent with this. I can understand that at some point there are always generic characters, and not all of them can be reflected by words like "alive" or at least dynamic, but from what I can see, I won't be disappointed. The "important" characters in the story will not be empty per se.The concept of the story is what fundamentally attracted me to read. The synopsis reflects well what you will find if you read this, so I won't beat around the bush. If the potential I see is used in the right way, this can be very good. #NoNTROtherwise, good job.

A really interesting Romance novel. Has potential. Just added to library

Neglected by the KingEnslaved by the QueenBullied by her royal siblingsHated by The Kingdom's HeroOstracized by her own peopleEve had enough!She ripped off her disguised and began to fight back, flaunting her skills and talents– extremely beautiful, highly intelligent, proficient in medicinal knowledge, great combat skills, and with rare talent– Beast Taming! Eve– the Forsaken Princess will ascend to the throne, not just conquering kingdoms but also capturing the hearts of the powerful gentlemen– A hero knight, An Infamous Hunter, and the Tyrant Crown Prince!Hunter: "Run away with me, Princess. I'll free you from your cage. I'll give you the taste of this so-called Freedom.  Let's travel around the world."Crown Prince: "Divorce your Scum Husband. Marry me. I'll give you everything– my power. I'll pamper you. Let's conquer all kingdoms together!"Hero Knight: "You are my wife. You can't leave me. You are bound to me for eternity. And your body... doesn't LIE. You also want me."(Author: "Can she just have all men?🤭😉)Like a phoenix rising from ashes,  Eve  reruns her life, determined to trample everyone with her vengeance.

I love  novels with dragons and seeing one, I'm so thrilled to be reading it. The MC , although he's king, his not overpowered. The world building is delicate and well crafted. My advice to other readers is to definitely Read this book!.Highly recommend!.

I hesitated at first because there is only an author's review but it's actually a decent read, I will recommend this book!

Love this book, cracks me up non stop. Keep it coming!