Partially drawn-out story, too much potential that went to waste. Other than that, amazing world-building and very nice ideas. The author should be more imaginative in his expansion of plots.
this gives me somuch dashavu I swear I read it before but it was the uther way around where the Mc was female with a male name and the mom was poisoned with a memory Thang that the Mc fixed
Booooooooooooooringgggggggggg! 15 chapter and nothing is happening, all the problems of the world is solved for free just like that, age is doubled, limbs can grow back just practicing some method giving for free, even the VR set are giving for free. Even the bad guy gave up going after the MC early for the time being. What is there to see. The game system is confusing and boring, you can increase your body attributes and get your own territory, it's just all too meaningless and a lot obvious of waste of time, like saying many time that the broadcast is translated for Chinese in mandarin, Indians in Hindu....
This is honestly just good, The MC is not an annoying mc that always have a plan and have his emotions in control like a robot, the heroines, if you can even call them that lol because only one of them managed to get closer to the mc, have the basic personalities that you can read in every Chinese novels, the cold CEO and the likes, but the author is slowly deviating them from their roles, which is better because if they will just be another cardboard that just replaced the old ones. About the world though, it's slowly getting revealed, with forces not even the mc knows, understandably so, so the author can have more content than just the usual villain vs protagonist trope.Overall it's an amazing novel if you want an mc that's not a psychopath that wants to take everything from someone and just see everything as a trophy for him to take
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and a good story just doesn’t and the kind of story I was expecting the story starts very well, but then a lot of things started to appear that I personally don’t like, but this is just my opinion, I hope you keep writing, but I don’t think so I will read this story (sorry for my English)
This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!
hey author do you mind actually writing on your old books because I'm sure people are getting tired of buying advanced chapters ( for such a large price) only for you to stop updating your novels thanks
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