The Founder's Return

At the time of my review, this story was a candidate for publication.“Was” is the word, because this book is languishing in what I call “trial hell.” It is good enough to gain fans (like yours truly) but not good enough for Webnovel to spend money to translate and publish.So let’s analyze this story that pushed me to review it even if it is only 60 chapters!The translation is good, not great. It contains the usual errors that you see in all translated novels from Webnovel. The updating was excellent; after all, they released all 60 chapters together! LolThe world, from the little bit that has been revealed, is the typical Xanxia world.What attracted me was the MC. He had in interesting origin story, in both worlds. And the author did go out of his way to make them interesting and contrasting to each other. Not to mention the humour he was able to inject while he killed the main characters, making the gruesome scenes like macabre!And the MC is not an idiot, nor an emotionless scumbag like so many MCs on Webnovel. The MC fought hard, and endured humiliation while keeping his eyes on his goal: Revenge! And the author wrote the MC in such a way as the MC can be sympathetic to me. Redeeming the MC’s actions.There is a bit of romance, but the story at this time is focused on hilariously getting revenge. And since the MC is a pretty smart guy, he outplays his opponents, while making the opponents think they won just before the MC pulled the rug under them. Each revenge plot is different and interesting! Making you crave for the next plot.And that is unfortunate, because this book was never picked up. Leaving readers like myself wondering about the MC’s future plots... Hopefully, Webnovel might pick up this novel for publication in the future. Because these first 60 chapters are pretty fun and this book has a lot of potential!

This is one of the best books Ive ever read so far, I like the story plot because of how the main character have the strength equal to the heavens. Kudos to the wonderful creativity of the author.

This an excellent read but the updates are just bad and not consistent at all, only if they update more...Even though I think you should read it and plzzzzzzzz vote vote vote it is the least we can do thnx

Writing quality is fine and thats a give a way for what the story lacks and the story development is so so, not sure if it will improved in the future, Character Design is a bit problematic, The ppl surrounding the Mc is far from normal, theyre bunch of weirdos that makes one worry, idk if theyre experiencing a mental illness or something, being different from the rest is good but, the author made them off the chart like really. Her family being protective is understandable but her sister being a yandere that seems to infect the other character to the point of being a creepy themeselves is what ticked me off. Idk maybe not just for me but you can also try this one out, might works best and suit your taste.

Just wanna write myself a shameless 5 star review lol but I gotta thank everyone that has write a review for me! Thank you! Further I am writing this story because a lot of the cultivation stories that I have read makes the love drama in there so boring. And I just wanna spice it up. Thank you for reading.

I welcome you my friend who dares to read this story.If you are brave enough to read this, what awaits you is a true feast of bad puns and even worse jokes that more often than not break the fourth wall and probably a few more. Acctually, pretty much everything about this story is bad: stability of updates? Whenever the author feels like it! Story Development? is there even a story to develop?! Character Design? ... World Background? Well, ordinary... The only saving grace would be the writing quality which is top notch and the only thing that makes this abomination readable beyond the first few chapters!But my brave warrior!, after all this you may be wondering: This story that should receive a rating of 1.8 according to Webnovel, how come it got a full 5 of 5 points?!?!?!My friend, let me enlighten you! This story has long transcended the categories of the Webnovel scoring system! But alas, I definetely didnt lie when I called pretty much everything about this story bad! "So how could this be?

i very much enjoy talking about psychological ideas and dispositions but when i get to far into the unknown i just dont like the outlandish guess'sin these types of debate/ conversation you have to start at a common point of agreement or it is a matter of opinion. though i have nothing against your or other peoples opinions, but blind faith can be a damaging thing.

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