Really good. There is a unique premise and even if the mc is strong since the beginning there is a power accumulation. The only problem is the author wasn't satisfied so he dropped the novel literally at the middle. The author had 2 volumes planned but when he ended the first he just dropped...Still it is a good novel, but unfortunately with a disappointing ending.
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A good betrayal system novel worth reading. I have seen that many are spamming with bad reviews but on the contrary it is many times better than the novels trending now. Most of the novels are cliche and this is different from them.Also most people are saying mc should do that, do this but what you have to understand is mc is not you. Mc is a unique individual so he may make good or bad decision and thinks different than you. so dont spam author saying he should do that and this.I hope author will continue to write this novel and your writing quality has improved as chapters increased. The reason i gave 5 stars even though it doesn't deserve it is because it is unique and different from cliche novels and has a good world building, character development
This is was somewhat decent but still trash. The plot is inconsistent and non existent at the same time. For instance mc, who is a max lvl player, was almost killed by a starter lvl boss. How that even possible, only the author knows. Plus judging from the horrible plot and it's flaws, I can tell that this is a copy and paste of someone else novel.
There are only three chapters so far and it is really great so far. The first chapter really brought me the trust issue when that old man did something like 'that.' And for Shade, he is a pretty much realistic character except he decided to buy the 30$ chocolate. Haha, to sum it up the plot is great, the character is well-made and it gives me thrill since the story is really enjoyable. Read this if you enjoy the survival and thrilling stuff.P.S. Great job, author!!! Keep writing, I wish you well in your contest, I would vote for you if I have some spare powerstone.
Writing Quality = GoodStability Updare = Really GoodBut as for the rest.. Bad...Paragon of destruction = Paragon of averageFirst point, MC doesn't seem to be logical at all, he threw golden opportunity to train just because he want to find a shortcut (that doesnt exist) or can't handle the training.Second point, MC does stupid logical decision even if the best answer/solution is slapped at his face, he goes full retard because of plot (?)Third point, the MC is AVERAGE, he doesnt have any talent whatsoever; what he has is the forbidden real, that from what is shown is not even that 'legendary', an example of a (my imaginary) scale:Common - Rare - Rare+ - Epic - LegendaryThe forbidden realm is only at Rare, or at max between Rare and Rare+But the worst point is that 'this advantage' that he has on the forbidden realm IS USELESS; he has a forbidden realm that is only mentioned at the start of the novel and during chapter 50 from what I understood, and nothing. We know nothing about the forbidden realm, what it is exactly, what type it is, NOTHING, he doesn even use it; and we are already 100+ chapters in.
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