11/10, would devote my entire life to reading this. If I could be teleported into this story, I would but like..as a bystander maybe, someone who just watches everything happen. The scenes are described extremely well just as the characters and the fights are the chefs biggest kiss 🤌🏼 . The suspense and anticipation between chapters and events are not too long nor too short which keeps me hooked and wanting more without feeling overwhelmed.
Am excited to see how everything continues to go on.
I honestly like I actually feel the dillema's emotions of the MC and their thoughts are rather interesting to read. It's also somewhat relatable in a way. First chapter started with a kick because of the lore drop and it got me hooked. I can tell that this novel was written with love because each paragraph was written properly. Story is also engaging, makes me want to read the next.
Obviously bias author review. I believe that this story is worth the read, yeah it can have a frustrating start but I believe if you stick with it that it will be worth the time.
Updates are daily with 1-4 chapters a day unless I'm in a really good mood then there could be more.
story development: If you like stories with lots of action, women, and interesting twists then I'd recommend reading my work.
Character designs are amazing <3
The world itself has a lot to offer and I'd love for everyone to join me as I bring Haru's journey through the craziest of rollercoasters.
Harem? I didn't intend for it but if it comes off that way and it's supported, I'll consider taking a vote on it later.
Writing quality isn't terrible. I usually go through everything to fix mistakes and if I miss something tell me!
All feedback/support is appreciated.
Thank you if you choose to support my novel. Even if you drop the story, I appreciate the time you took to read it in the first place.
Popular Reviews
Am excited to see how everything continues to go on.
The start is amazing and the story has a very smooth and interesting flow. If anyone reads this, please give this story a try.
Btw, if haru is single in the next few chaps I'll take him in my 2-D male husband harem. If he's not... who cares. I'll still take him.
Good job with the story author.
Keep it up, author!
The cover = OG
The beggining= OG
The character= OG
The setting= OG
Story Development= OG
A 5-star deserving story of course!
Therefore, best of luck on creating more chapters for us!
10/10 best story I've read in a while.
Updates are daily with 1-4 chapters a day unless I'm in a really good mood then there could be more.
story development: If you like stories with lots of action, women, and interesting twists then I'd recommend reading my work.
Character designs are amazing <3
The world itself has a lot to offer and I'd love for everyone to join me as I bring Haru's journey through the craziest of rollercoasters.
Harem? I didn't intend for it but if it comes off that way and it's supported, I'll consider taking a vote on it later.
Writing quality isn't terrible. I usually go through everything to fix mistakes and if I miss something tell me!
All feedback/support is appreciated.
Thank you if you choose to support my novel. Even if you drop the story, I appreciate the time you took to read it in the first place.
I guess i can only read till 30 since i am not rich 😭🫂
bye author san