This is freaking good. This is the story on Earth and you guess what. It does really dangerous thing though. Come on guys. Author has balls to not hide crimes of Christanity or talk about raising foxes for fur. People got really ****ed up because of peace. Even if human ability to communicate across the world improved to another level. Freedom of speech moved only little forward from medieval times. You can talk whatever you want but... It cannot be offensive. When you combine this with generation of snowflakes... It always offends someone. It's simillar to people that attack novels with rape. It's real... It happens. Hiding its existence makes things worse... We humans are ****ed up species for sure. Good luck author. Don't take snowflakes attacks to heart!
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. Follow me for exp ;)16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters.Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km)After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change.Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met.Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know.Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read)SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!)Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way)Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities)World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained)P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify.It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants.Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do?It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions.Have a nice day everyone!
For awhile i thought they were gonna drop this story. But they brought it back. Looking forward to it because they have enought background where its not overwhelming but is just right so it doesn't take you off track.
Hi everyone! This is 'Orange' and its my very first time writing a Novel and I am hoping to learn a lot in this long Journey.. In this story there no raincarnation, the mc have only one single life 🤣 which he love a lot Ahem.. I means the mc is weak but he just happened to have a high luck giving him opportunities to become strong. You will also see a second mc who have system so many #cheat codes 🙄. If you have any questions you can ask me by replying on this review..
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