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The author is the real villain.He misleads his readers into thinking this mc has some sort of guts to him. No! He is a worthless beta male cuck. If this is the way the author describes a villain I'd like to see the author in real life bringing in some juice for her wife's kids and her boyfriend before sending them to off a seventh honeymoon while he takes care of the kids.

The story is very good, probably the best there is on the subject of football, although there is a novel that is very good, but that is not the theme, the real problem of this story, or what for me is a problem, is which develops very, very slowly, if in each game there are 3 or 4 episodes, we will never be able to see him play on a professional team, for the rest, it is very good.

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First of all, the author's descriptive skill is top-notch. I love how the prologue kept me stuck to my seat, in anticipation of what would happen next. This book is highly recommended. I feel this plot is an Original that should be encouraged.Bravo, author. This is incredible, and thank you for that wonderful Prologue

Okay, the main character is something different.  I appreciate that.That said, I literally wrote something like this as a bad joke once; the punchline being that there was never a paragraph without a level up, and the things leveling getting increasingly silly.  And here, it seems to be played totally straight, and not that... weird.  It just happens, and that's all.  It's not bad, just bland.  I'll read more, and adjust this if it changes later on, but still, it's kinda hard to get through sometimes.

Liked the story idea, had great potential but it's wayyyyy too slow. At chapter 43 she has barely done anything. Gone to a dojo hasn't done anything special and when she gets to the shadow realm she stays inside a cave for like 5 chapters cooking. Whats more disappointing is that she is meant to have completed every game in her country but she seems like a noob that conveniently remembers things now and then. Im out peace, gl with the story

What an empty space he feels. I really relate to his pain but it's kind of hard to make Rihanne stay and I don't think he will ever forget the pain.

The story is creeping AF. My instinct feel terrifying by reading this story, Keep updating and never give up for the author! This is my comment about your story, Hope you like it. 🤍🤍🤍