Good intresting plot but the protagonist has faced 0 adversity till now no backstabbing no jealousy hate crimes I mean thats one part I like but it completely not being there makes it too smooth sailing for the mc and lack of meaningful interactions except dana further there is close to 0 world building aside from the golden dragon city there is hinted that its a big world but the concept has not been developed also there are multiple filler chapters like trial arc and the rewards that followed it took 20 chapters and then the bus incident again pointless an actual development of foreshadowing of where the story is going because there is no clear antagonist it is just the mc getting stronger and everyone is helping him
Whelp, this is my current favorite novel to the point of paying for the extra chapters lol. it's a really fun read. I'm looking forward to how it progresses and how the characters develop. I'm also loving the slow burn romance since the author isn't rushing to age up the cast despite it being easy to do with his system of power.
I've read every one of the author's books I've loved every single one of them and Beast taming is my favorite Power System. so between faith and the author's ability and a type of power I love I'm willing to rate this highly before it even gets started.
Entertaining!!!
Love the character concept, the power scaling was gripping me to keep reading, the character progression though is lackluster and simple, the overall detail in the writing was disappointing at times as I wanted to know more!
By chapter 95 I expected there to have been a personal motivation for the story and characters, but the paywall arrived too soon.
I enjoyed the hints of the war to come and the innocence of the character, again read up to 95, but I would expect there to be a twist by the end of the school ark going into the missions and war stories and all the characters having met in school leading to natural encounters and world progression.
Overall fun and enjoyable but it didn’t grip me enough to spend time on it over other novels in the genre.
Keep at it author, can’t wait to see how far your writing improves in the future!!
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Love the character concept, the power scaling was gripping me to keep reading, the character progression though is lackluster and simple, the overall detail in the writing was disappointing at times as I wanted to know more!
By chapter 95 I expected there to have been a personal motivation for the story and characters, but the paywall arrived too soon.
I enjoyed the hints of the war to come and the innocence of the character, again read up to 95, but I would expect there to be a twist by the end of the school ark going into the missions and war stories and all the characters having met in school leading to natural encounters and world progression.
Overall fun and enjoyable but it didn’t grip me enough to spend time on it over other novels in the genre.
Keep at it author, can’t wait to see how far your writing improves in the future!!
I’ll return later in the novels lifetime.
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