The First King of Beasts

1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

this story is ok. but thats it.the concept is nothing new but still rare enough to be interesting. the execution is meh.
10 chapters prologue with some stuff thats relevant, 15 chapters of different pov's that feel like filler. that leaves me with 25 out of the 50 chapters i read with actual mc plot and its bland, the mc is not really memorible. the mc just goes into a dungeon and clears it without trying, he can tame 1000 beasts of c rank and below from the very begining, its boring there is no adventure and no excitement in this adventure story.

im actually struggling with the rating for this story. 5 stars is an exceptional story, 4 stars a good story. 3 stars is an ok story, 2 stars not worth wasting your time on and 1 star is trash.

this story is not good enough for 3 stars but better then 2 star.

so my rating is 2.7 stars.

Give this book as much support as you can! Who knows, maybe a few gifts here, golden tickets there, and power stones elsewhere can motivate me to indulge in the secret art of mass release.

The world end made the world to become a game where the ones who are deemed good for the jobs are given systems to protect their world.         

The book is very interesting and I got myself stuck reading it.

Keep on the good world. K_K

I really enjoyed the concept of the world becoming a game. excited to see where this would go. I recommend this story for a quick read. Nijec job.

I liked the cover so i said lets give this a try. Was i wrong for doing that:no i enjoy the novel:yes.
Its an interesting concept of system base novel, but i also feel that the mc wants to grow further and be independent of it. To bad there arent more chapters yet.

I'm tired of this scenario. You are not a god, you are ahead just because you have acquired these abilities, otherwise your destiny is to die in pain. As someone who loves evil mc, this novel is 0.

the book has great potential. however, it is in desperate need of someone to proof read and grammar check. almost every paragraph has issues in that department.