The First Fusion Master: Beast Wave

Broly was bulky and large. Xerxes was athletic and pretty thin. Broly's eyes were full of innocence, Xerxes's were full of lust and bloodthirst...Lust directed at the Angels, and Bloodthirst directed at...

The entire exchange happened in little more than a second.

Since Bolt was taking initiative to better his memory, Avery resolved to let him be. It was good to let him decide how he wishes to arrange his training regime so long as he properly finishes all his tasks. Doing so would only boost his drive for further improvement and lessen his mental strains in the long term.

"Blacky..."

Amazing story so far. The story itself is well-written, and while the writing quality could be worked on, the grammar is nigh immaculate. The first incident isn't really unique, but the author does a good job portraying it as such. Keep up the good work, author!

This is a review for an FO. I like your story cover

After 13 chapters, the characters begin behaving and speaking in extremely unexpected ways, talking about events that never happened while also forgetting events that did happen. I'm almost certain that the author has two different versions of the same novel, with critical differences in the events of the plot between the two, and has mistakenly mixed up chapters of the two together. The story was going well at first, although the chemistry between the two main characters was lacking. But I initially dismissed it as just awkward writing. But after reading the 14th and 15th chapter, nothing made sense anymore and the attraction between the two felt more forced than ever. On the bright side, the way the author narrates the environment, the mood, and the thoughts and feelings of the characters is extremely good. I just hope that whatever made the characters begin behaving oddly and speaking in very self-contradictory ways gets resolved. The fact that nearly everything that happened during the first chapters is contradicted in a single dialogue in the 14th chapter leads me to believe that a huge mixup must have happened. The inconsistency is hard to overlook. I truly was enjoying the story but it just took such a sudden nosedive that I can't justify continuing to read it. Good luck, author.