Ding! Stealth System is activating!
Current Mission Type: Survival
[You have reincarnated by the gods into the body of a small demon child with ability to evolve and mask your energy from the Netherworld's skeletons, demons, and wraith armies.]
[In order to survive, you must increase your necromancer abilities and evolve into a pinnacle being, and completely infiltrate the ranks of the demons armies and level up your power!]
[There will be challenges, however, the more demons you kill, and the more missions you complete, the stronger your bloodline will become as you evolve and fight up the ladder of the netherworld]
[Use this opportunity to become a king of the netherworld! The worlds plagued by demons are counting on you to accomplish this task!]
[Ding! This message has been transmitted by the Heavenly Federation Alliance currently under siege by the demon armies...]
It was one lich against the world... The entirety of existence waited for him to complete his mission, and... he couldn't find his arm...
"Hmph, I am starting out as just a measly skeleton, but watch me evolve into a pinnacle being with my system...!"
[Ding!]
[Mission Starting now!]
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Release Rate: 3 chapter a day...
Voting: If you can help an author out, please do!
If I happen to get into the top hundred, 22 chapters a week...
If I get into the top fifty, 23 chapters a week...
If I get into the top twenty five, well... 25 chapters a week!
I speak English, btw, so sorry it's my first language, and that I don't have a lot of mistakes in my grammar...
Hope you enjoy The Evolving Stealth System...
The Evolving Stealth System
- Genre： Games
- Author： Blue_Ocean
- Translator：
- Status： Ongoing
- Rating(4.3 / 5.0) ★
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It's a tough world as an author, and I'll be writing 3 chapters a day, most days, as long as the world is nice to me, and doesn't ruin my writing time!
I write 5 - 10 hours a day, spend more time doing research, and always hope to improve...
As for this novel, Its about Duncan... the main character... as he tries to figure out how to go from a skeleton into a higher more powerful form in order to save his universe from being destroyed...
Hopefully, you can come join me on this journey, and forgive me for taking the tenth review spot!
Its painful seeing a false rating, so... anyways... hope you enjoy the story!
Writing Quality - So far i have come to like the way that you write your novel, and there does not seem to be a lot of grammatical issues, which is actually quite a rare thing to see in new novels. Perhaps you have some previous experience writing? Either way, I think you earned the 5 stars I have given you on this area.
Stability of Updates - Obviously 5 stars if you manage to keep up what you have promised. I would not want you to go as far as to release 25 chapters a week though, unless you really believe that you will be able to handle it without ruining the story.
Story Development - I will have to give this 3 stars at the moment as the story is only 7 chapters so far. I will change this based on what happens to the story in the future.
Character Design - I will leave this at 3 stars as well at the moment due to the ****** fact that we have not received a lot of information about our MC. It would be nice to get a prologue that somewhat explains how the life of our MC was before he was reincarnated into a skeleton. This rating will be changed as well once you have a few more chapters out.
World Background - Will keep this at 4 stars, although it is quite like the "Character Design" and "Story Development". We are still missing quite a lot of information regarding the world that he is in and the world he came from. For all I know he could have been an alien in his past life.
Mc mining ores in a cave, devil girl drops onto his front. Mc running away, stuck in ground 10 feet under. It's so abrupt and random, no transition or explanation.
Half the story mc is talking in his lalaland and readers have to make guesswork all the time what is happening. Is this the flashback or was it happening to mc now?
So, in summary, it's confusing and the author is mostly talking to himself about the key points of the story. It is missing a lot of context and the transitions are not there.
but seriously though, apparently demons have conquered 99% of the universe and 50% of hell so the heavens decided " M8 we know they conquered a lotta land so we decided that you know it's better if we wait until only 51% of everything is free before we do anything because that's reasonable"
anyways, the Mc is a 'spy' I'm assuming he's a pretty competent one since he's the one chosen to infiltrate hell, but then again he could just be sent there so that he'd get out of their hair.
The writing is bland, the characters are bland, if you wanna read a story about angels Vs demons read the bible, though be warned the main character of that story is OP and a total douche sometimes.
anyways Mr.'Author' instead of releasing 3 chapters a day, maybe you should spend more time on your 'research' and polishing which, not to be rude, but i doubt you do much of.