The Era Of Monsters

It’s not complete. Hope it has a sequel???

Are you still writing chapters or did you stop

I liked the characters of this story.but i didn't really get your jokes. moreover, you've to reduce repeated events.otherwise, the style u right is too difficult so i guess that time and the difficulty was the reason you repeated such sentence.I look forward that you will use more lightning in next chapter.

It's one of the best HP fanfic I have read so far and I have read more than 200 of them. The characters are well made and not overly op. 😊❤

I see around here that is tradition the "shameless five stars review from the authors

Wait you want to feel the taste of despair?????? What  man are you a masochist or something  will thus have a tragic ending  or NTR or the harem will die, dude, I don't know about  you but most people  don't want to feel " the taste of despair " not to be rude  or something  but you should look at the meaning of despair it means "losing all hope" and I don't think anyone wants that maybe you meant to say sadness as it's a part  of life but if this  novel  has tragic despair-inducing story then sorry not my cup of tea

I have so many things to point out.The start is pretty nice, and neat. However, for some reason, it just becomes... how should I say this, weird afterwards.The plot is quite... unique I guess? maybe you're trying to diverge from the usual face-slapping cultivation novels. But somehow, I really don't understand what the **** they're doing.I feel like the reasons on why they were there is forced, and kinda like an excuse to just play around.Also, I love Arkenvalle by the way. Please give her more screentime. In human form, please.

The introduction of the mysterious system and the quest at the end created a lot of intrigue, I am very excited about what will happen next!