Honestly incredible so far, really like the power system and characters so far.
Would love to see him explore the world he’s in throughly before going to other planets/planes, and would also love more consistency with updates tbh (would rate 5 stars if there were more updates)
Keep it up though, this one is proably got even more potential than ur other novel!
It’s a very solid novel, one of my favorites at the moment, and I think the author has done a great job improving on his writing.
Compared to his other novel this one seems to have a more in depth world building and the power system is pretty incredible.
My only complaints with this novel so far are:
- Main character is extremely cunning, but many times his approach to fights or problems is just one of pure strenght with little strategy, which makes sense against equally powerful or weaker enemies, but he brute forces things even when against enemies or odds he shouldn’t be able to overcome with just power.
- I believe there could be a bit more variation in the characters fighting styles and temperaments, most of Cain rivals so far just face him head on.
- There are, if I’m not mistaken 6 races in aether, but we have barely seen any character that isn’t a juman be portrayed, not really something that is bad, but I’m curious to know a bit more about the other races.
World building : Although not much world background is shown, two prologue chapters, the origin of the system, and a little bit of information about Gaia, are sufficient to demonstrate that the author has sufficient background to write the story.
Cain (MC): Mc can be defined as someone who is good to those who are good to him, bad to those who are bad to him or cross his moral line, and indifferent to the remaining ones. I especially like how he doesn't differentiate between male and female enemies and gets straight to kill. He is a reincarnator with sealed memories, but that isn't the main focus. He is resolute and smart and not naive and wimpy.
System: No major help. It doesn't reward him with any experience or anything. No subspace. No shop, etc. Until now, the system has served as a guide rather than a spoon feeder. It can change because various modules of the system are still locked.
Side characters: There are no major side characters till now except Levi, so I can't comment.
Writing quality: English is my second language, so even if the quality is bad, I wouldn't know
Updating speed: 4 chapters/week is not enough for me. At least 1 chapter per day should be the goal. But that is entirely up to the author.
Overall, a good novel with a great potentials. Kudos to the author.
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Would love to see him explore the world he’s in throughly before going to other planets/planes, and would also love more consistency with updates tbh (would rate 5 stars if there were more updates)
Keep it up though, this one is proably got even more potential than ur other novel!
Compared to his other novel this one seems to have a more in depth world building and the power system is pretty incredible.
My only complaints with this novel so far are:
- Main character is extremely cunning, but many times his approach to fights or problems is just one of pure strenght with little strategy, which makes sense against equally powerful or weaker enemies, but he brute forces things even when against enemies or odds he shouldn’t be able to overcome with just power.
- I believe there could be a bit more variation in the characters fighting styles and temperaments, most of Cain rivals so far just face him head on.
- There are, if I’m not mistaken 6 races in aether, but we have barely seen any character that isn’t a juman be portrayed, not really something that is bad, but I’m curious to know a bit more about the other races.
But the updating stability needs to improve.
World building : Although not much world background is shown, two prologue chapters, the origin of the system, and a little bit of information about Gaia, are sufficient to demonstrate that the author has sufficient background to write the story.
Cain (MC): Mc can be defined as someone who is good to those who are good to him, bad to those who are bad to him or cross his moral line, and indifferent to the remaining ones. I especially like how he doesn't differentiate between male and female enemies and gets straight to kill. He is a reincarnator with sealed memories, but that isn't the main focus. He is resolute and smart and not naive and wimpy.
System: No major help. It doesn't reward him with any experience or anything. No subspace. No shop, etc. Until now, the system has served as a guide rather than a spoon feeder. It can change because various modules of the system are still locked.
Side characters: There are no major side characters till now except Levi, so I can't comment.
Writing quality: English is my second language, so even if the quality is bad, I wouldn't know
Updating speed: 4 chapters/week is not enough for me. At least 1 chapter per day should be the goal. But that is entirely up to the author.
Overall, a good novel with a great potentials. Kudos to the author.