Constructive Criticism; Make the Prologue an Auxiliary chapter, and, if you are not going to have any other chapters that'll throw off the numbering of the chapters, remove the numbering.Well written by my standpoint, but definitely an erotica (of the few I've skimmed, one of the better). However, I don't much like erotica, so sorry, removed from my library.Keep up the good work, and try to update at-least once every other week lest you loose those who'd enjoy this story.;,;.
This story was rather rickety to begin with. It is random and filled with ham-handed Information Dumps. The Protagonist is an Idiot. I tried hard to hang in there despite the roughness of the story, because at the end of the day, I just like Zombie Stories. It was kinda weird when the protagonist got orgasmic feelings from probing Zombie brains with his fingerβ¦EEβ¦The breaking point was when the Protagonist DIDN'T WANT to look muscular and buff. I get more tired of this Fetish against manly physiques in these stories EVERY TIME I ENCOUNTER IT. Damned Nation! You can't argue that someone like Bolo Yeung is slow and awkwardβor grotesque. I guess having a manly physique ruins one's cross-dressing.
The Writing Quality is nice, the world building was Ok. I'm just vexed on how the MC act. He is intelligent when it comes to magic and things regarding battles; however the MC lacks some common sense and vigilance. He don't know how to stay lowkey and he should collect more information before he act. He's lack of vigilance to his surroundings causes him inconveniences. Lastly, he should open more common skill gatcha, even if he can't level them up at the same time - at least he has a lot of skill in his arsenal that can be useful to him when some unforeseen accident arrives. He can also acquire some passive skill that can help him hide his mana fluctuation and can automatically sense if there is someone spying on him.
I rarely write a review (probably never), but I have to do it this time because this is one of the best quality novel I have read and I think it deserves to get support and a continuation. Not many novels get my attention as most is generic. For example, mc get powerful and slaughter people left and right and is mostly almost about brawl and no brains and arrogant. But this novel is different from what I have read so far. MC is humble (very rare) and is highly intelligent. He even treats servants respectful because he has virtues ingrained in him from his past life in Earth. Every human is equal.π€ I hope, his belief don't change. Although he do kill, if he gets offended. This novel need more chapters to judge, but so far it gets a 10/10 from meπ
This is such an amazing novel that needs more recognition. Najib is such a talented writer that he can just make a masterpiece with eyes closed!.. All my love and support.. Denise Ashley
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