The Enemy of the World By Leonel Caldela/ Edited MTL

Hello good sir I was scrolling through your novel and I could not help but see the potential in it... So I was wondering if you would like a part time native English speaker to help you edit your work

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pretty good read. I could see this being developed into a manga

So far, I am on chapter 60 and I've quite enjoyed it. What has keep me invested is the various mythology elements. I love the world building so far!! Not many compliants, just a few personal very small pet peeves this story ticks. I wish there was more time given too see character interactions and general development. For example, I would really like to see more development /details into the crafting abilities the protagonist has. It's been pretty combat heavy so far and I'm just more of a slice of life reader so take that with a grain of salt :]]

GRACE >> hey silver head ... what r u doin sittin on the floor its totally disgraceful😒😡 y dont u sit on a couch big bro.

Note : This update is here today for me to vent my anger. That's why it is regrettably short....

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