'Mira Storm? The new student?' Xavier is shocked by the dark memories Jake has, 'What's this memory? Is Jake from another world?' He sees a bright red light glowing in Jake's shadow-black mindscape.
The writing quality drops drastically as the story continues. The worst part is probably the storytelling voice or the writing style shifts in a poor direction. Instead of using descriptions to tell the story, it shifts to a bad narration. The author starts telling you how you should feel rather than using their writing to allow you to arrive at the conclusion they are looking for. It’s a very lazy writing style in my opinion. The side characters become less and less relevant as the story progresses and their development nearly stops entirely. The worst part is the author continues to jam them in your face. This makes the story a boring slog of irrelevance that you continue to read only due to sunk cost, having paid for earlier chapters.
Hello, this is the author here~ I'll shamelessly give my novel a 5-star rating heheheh. Anyway, since this is my debut novel in the ML genre, please gimme more advice (and don't bully the poor author). Expect to read the journey of Neo, an ordinary reader, who became slime and awakened as a beast tamer! The novel will be full of comedy, action, various adventures and of course, a lot of interesting beasts, unique hunters, and many more! Have fun reading~ PS: Look at our cute little slime Neo
I’ve only read the free chapters for now, but I can say that the concept is awesome and it’s the first time I’ve seen it. I like the inclusion of multiple power systems for progression. The only problem I’ve seen so far are character interactions in the early chapters not having much fluff to them.
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