as of so far it is a good story. Not overly nationalistic but that could change further along. I always love a good farming story although I hesitate when it's an urban one but will give it a shot
Honestly, it is hard for me to even rate it this highly. The english, grammar, and writing quality itself is subpar. The author really needs another person to go over his work. Its so bad it feels like a draft instead of the final work. The setting changes on a wim and the author seems to forget to tell us some info so we find it later. Almost seems like he is making it up as he goes. Its worse with the skills that are just deplorable how thought out and how badly it is used. None of the skills show proficiency, none of the monsters have a name other than monster until the author feels like it. Then there is the point of messed up names for the classes. The author seems to alive that the mcs class is something like a middle ground for supporters like a sorcerer or something but calls it a magician then another student has the magician class that isn’t support. The f is going on with the classes. Then u can just forget understanding the dialogue between characters bc the authors grammar fails to even explain what’ going on. Basically it is a novel that has an interesting concept that falls short on even the grammar much less the forced plot, and forced characters that are one dimensional ina way I thought wasn’t possible. Then there is the lack of world building that just limits the story even more.
Copy paste of Worldwide Simulation Era, precise from background, power system, even his first reincarnation disease and solution were the exact same to a T lol.
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Stardom is like the combine story of I'm really a Superstar and Jay Aslan...i thought on the 1-10 chapters it's the same plot to Jay Aslan story here in webnovel and it have some parts of I'm really a Superstar. The plot should be improve and modify to be different from other story and should be unique/fresh so that the readers will enjoy reading it. The characters should also be modify or improve to be different from Jay Aslan because they are really the same especially the MC And his family/friends. So far I don't have a problem from the stability of updating
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