The Duke's Unavoidable Attraction

guys guys guys. its a hidden gem, trust me. I went in with low expectations, but this is truly a good read(i know, a rare occurrence on this app). Somehow, author manages to make the edgy mc not cringe(mostly), and, the comedy hits. Whether it be poorly named superheroes or actual jokes it manages to make me laugh(also a rare occurrence on this app).give it a read, also, give it say... 5-10 chaps before deciding if you like it or not. That was enough time for me to like it.

Story is good, i admit and I am still very interested in it but in later chapters, the story is getting stretched, even more then chewing gum, in best novels i read the MC and his/her team already rescued there family and already started building there fortress, made alliance, and here he is still on searching resources. Please change that.

It has a decent start that’s going somewhere.Only problemS are within the grammar. Some sentences had minor problems.The big problem however is that the Author mixes up his past and present tense. This honestly puts me off as someone who grew up with English and it might affect my writing if i get into so imma stop reading.My advice is to get software like grammarly or just get an editor but this is the author’s story so he can do whatever he wants.Maybe in the future, I’ll come back to this.

Such a shame, the story got me really hooked but the writing quality makes it a headache to read and understand. Fast passed, the story is going fast, random things happens when there is already something going on. Characters interactions could be more deep and meaningful, tbh I didn’t feel that much emotions and thoughts behind the conversations.Also I don’t quite yet understand the MC on a deeper level, he just does stuffs.

Good luck bro like your novel.

The story has great potential and is really immersive. The concept, the characters, and the world is something you really enjoy and the story starts off strong. I would recommend this story

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