The Dryad King’s Wrath: Reclaiming the World from Humans

This story is top class, one of the best in Hardcover.  You need to work on ur update schedule

It was supposed to be a great story, but the MC is very dumb and does not enjoy what he has, and worse came from a modern age and he seems very *****, and to make matters worse he says a good person and decides very fast to take a life even though NEET was previously isolated by persecution (as a coward may have a life-long resolve). To make matters worse he will be targeted to be engaged to growers but stronger than himself, and even then he goes to a place that anyone could say goes the **** (anyone would ask the cultivation levels of the world and especially where is going, but he does not ...) the system seems to have a great knowledge of the world, but MC does not ask anything useful to him.He said he read a lot of novels, but he does not even know what dual cultivation is, and to pamper he was in a perfect place to stay strong, but what he does (he leaves the place to go to a dangerous place, especially for him, cultivation too high for their own age, even being 3 times more difficult to grow).My view of the MC * super idiotObservation> The novel has many cliches, and much repetition of phrases and information making it very repetitive.The initial idea of ​​the novel is very good and needs a lot of revision and also a touch of realism, mainly psychological of the MC.

Full of repeated plot lines. I don’t care which book came first or second. But I see that there are shït tonne of repeated plot lines. What do u expect a immortal cultivator who has immortal body to do in modern world? Even if they self imposed to not steal or resort to criminal activities, there are lot of ways. But, it’s China, so strut ur stuff in front of old acquaintance or exes, go to the antique shop, have something to do with makeup, oh and find a rich family to cure them of something....I bet there will be stone gambling too. Things I like: MC is not a teenager or young adult that looses his shít next second a 2D side character comes. And love the daughter character. Author did a good job of padding with words.

A jewel waiting to be lapidated. Simply sensational, author, you have talent and creativity a lot!!! I blinked and had finished reading all 3 chaps without even realizing it. This story involved me too much!!!

the only reason for the 4 stars is because the standard of webnovel has dropped down and reached the mud for they are not developing the writers nor giving them a screening process to post

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Nice overall. Seems to have potential. The story is focused on the other characters  as the MC can't move.It's going to be interesting to see how the author deals with the eventual OPness of the MC though.

Your story holds potential. I can see that you have a very clear image in your head of how your story looks and plays out, but due to a lack of rhythm in your writing, a protagonist that could be better developed, and repeated grammar and sentence structure mistakes, it fails to come across. Overall, I believe you can get there. You just have to keep practicing. You might want to consider hiring an editor, a least until your English improves. I wish you the best of luck!